While writing or editing a poem there are specific questions you should ask yourself.
Struggling with POV
Who are you writing about?
Who are you writing this for?
Struggling with Verb Tenses
When did the specific situation happen?
Struggling with the story
What was happening?
What caused it to happen?
What did your surroundings look like?
What were you feeling about the specific situation?
What message do you want to emphasize?